Blessed Twice
Some time ago, I sent out a call for some writing prompts for practice on my blog, eventually receiving one for Hinawa’s pregnancy. From the start, I knew I wanted to try and do it from Flint’s view, rather than just being a quick month-by-month chronicle; becoming much more of a fic about the twins’ birth than Hinawa’s pregnancy. This was originally intended to be a bit longer, with a third flashback section, but was deleted as I felt it didn’t give much advancement to the story. Presenting this from one person’s viewpoint was difficult, mainly because I personally don’t really have too much experience with first-person writing. Hopefully, the writing’s not too bad, though I possibly might go back and revise it in the future. Of course, please leave some constructive critique/any helpful tips on improvement, it goes a very long way.
Some time ago, I sent out a call for some writing prompts for practice on my blog, eventually receiving one for Hinawa’s pregnancy. From the start, I knew I wanted to try and do it from Flint’s view, rather than just being a quick month-by-month chronicle; becoming much more of a fic about the twins’ birth than Hinawa’s pregnancy. This was originally intended to be a bit longer, with a third flashback section, but was deleted as I felt it didn’t give much advancement to the story. Presenting this from one person’s viewpoint was difficult, mainly because I personally don’t really have too much experience with first-person writing. Hopefully, the writing’s not too bad, though I possibly might go back and revise it in the future. Of course, please leave some constructive critique/any helpful tips on improvement, it goes a very long way.
